#ooc

HA

I wouldn't suppose anybody would want to look at this and tell me if there is anything egregious?

Not looking for fine proofreading

just

brain can't

Of course

mind, omg, the kids letters almost made me cry

they were so kind

I feel very loved, which even if I don't get the thing, is a win

Typo in first sentence: "a a"

ah, eagle-eyed rae

Three spaces after period here: "Theatre Participation. YSU’s "

Yeah, hangovers from cutting about 2 pages worth of stuff.

More concerned about flow?

No worries, not nitpicking, just doing the ol' QC I'm used to 😄

fair!

Gen Ed vs. gen-ed (written differently in different spaces?)

In this paragraph starting with "My lecture-primary courses are all about student engagement. " It seems to repeat "I try to" and similar a number of times. It works, but maybe emphasize less that you try, and more that you DO? It reads a little repetitive.

Very minor though, it reads really well!

Poor Adam, if Piper knew she might try to come offer condolences. Then again that might not help!

I'm sure word will get around.

I mean.... an eshu was on-scene.

that was the last written, too

I will give it a new go after dinner

overall impression? Do I sound like a good teacher but not egotistical or braggy?

Yes.

I am NOT good at this kind of stuff.

Probably part of why I get weird & formal

You do not sound braggy at all!

You sound good!

It makes me want to go to your classes 🙂

I didn' even talk about costume history dress-up!

(I bring in chitons and veils and french hoods and corsets...)

Maybe you should?

AFK For an hour

Sorry, headache and I wandered off without saying anything :(

aw

feeling better?

I have wine and paczki

It’s not time yet!

not time?

I will have coconut curry shrimp on rice. And I must stop sorting mail to head it now. It's FFYS night here.

I AM having coconut curry shrimp on rice........

back

Yay!!

((sigh)) BOTH pairs of my main-stay glasses have something wrong that makes them unwearable. I have backups thank God, but....."

Still a pain

Yeah.

And my backups are backups for a reason. They're an older Rx.

Is not paczki day yet

/roll coin